14 de abril de 2011

envío una disculpa...

envío una disculpa
por los sueños cancelados,
por los guantes sin pareja,
por los labios que temblaron,
por las tardes de los sábados.

envío una disculpa redonda,
colorida; una disculpa que rebota.

envío una disculpa que sane,
que proteja -aunque no cure-
envío una disculpa portátil,
una disculpa amuleto, agenda,
una disculpa invernadero.

envío una disculpa que sonría,
que entibie desde dentro,
una disculpa analgésica,
conjugable en cualquier tiempo.

envío una disculpa, verdadera.

26 comentarios:

† Tetraédrico Superman † dijo...

Disculpa aceptada! =)

YOPPPP dijo...

Buenísimos tus Textos Como siempre =)

El de siempre dijo...

Me gusta mucho su página. Y su poesía. Y su manera de ver el mundo. Da gusto conocer personas verdaderas, auténticas, que no tienen miedo de escribir lo que sienten, y sobre todo, lo que piensan y desean. Vales mil, nunca cambies. Eso es tuyo. Felicidades por tu arte.

Rachel Blue dijo...

¡♥!

Monica Morales dijo...

ey, a què hora subiò este texto???

:)

lindo lindo... me suena a canciòn, por el ritmo y la rima. No alcanzo a imaginar la mùsica, pero seguro serìa dulce.

El primer pàrrafo no es mi favorito, lo confieso... pero donde inician las adjetivaciones de la disculpa, vaya, el poema toma vida... y color: "redonda, colorida(...) que rebota"

En verdad que una disculpa puede ser todo eso que (tan bien) dices.

Mis favoritas son: la disculpa que sana, aunque no cure; la amuleto, para la buena suerte; la agenda, por mi mala memoria; la invernadero, porque es una espacio de mucho amor y cuidados; y la conjugable en cualquier tiempo, por su efecto retroactivo y porque, al final de cuentas, es una palabra y yo amo las palabras.

Este poema es, casi, una garantìa contra el rechazo (de la disculpa).

Serìa una linda canciòn, sin duda.
saludos!

Almis dijo...

¡wooow!! excelente forma de describirlo. Hay tantas formas por la que puede nacer una disculpa, pero tu lconjugas el verso de manera fantastica, gracias....

Una disculpa por el paso no dado, por cada promesa olvidada.
Una disculpa sin pudor, amigable, con luz propia.
Una disculpa de corazón ♥.

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